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March 12th, 2009, 10:45 pm

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Reply VexxBlack, March 12th, 2009, 10:31 pm

Lets point stuff out Okay, I think what could be wrong with this that I could improve on, is the Razor Leaf move being more...attractve. And I know, the colors of the Buizel, but it's hard to remember x3;

And I signed it, just for the heck of it. So let me know what you all think :3

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Reply Captain Ghost, March 13th, 2009, 10:07 am

Signed it? Where? -looks- o.o

Buizel looks fine to me..

As for the razor leaf, I like the shape of the leaves...If I would change ANYTHING at all, it'd probably by the lines behind it. I don't know quite how to describe it, but I'd try and make their motion appear more... as if they were spinning or something. I recall them spinning in the anime, I guess.

So what I mean is, instead of [or on top of] the straight lines denoting movement towards the buizel, I'd probably add lines hinting at the leaves spinning in a circular motion.

Sorry if it this isn't what you're asking for, or if I'm not too clear. If you'd like, I could try and draw out what I'm talking about...

Either way, keep up the good work. I love the way you draw your characters :3

Reply VexxBlack, March 13th, 2009, 8:09 pm

Yeah, I understand what you mean, I'll try that next time.
And thanks :3

Reply Smashfan56 (Guest), April 2nd, 2011, 3:21 pm

@Captain Ghost sig is at the veeeeeeery top left corner.

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